Smile :-)
With my first attempt at poetry winning lot of accolades, I wanted to do write one more poem ๐ So bear with me and read on ๐
Forget all your worries for a while
And just smile,
You need not run a mile,
A smile is what keeps u senile ๐ ๐
Life is about being happy and sad,
Then why worry and be only sad,
Come everything, be glad
And donโt get mad ๐
Problems will come and go,
But your smile will bring a glow,
Which keeps you going,
And doesnโt make life boring.
All this is very simple,
So Smile all the way with a dimple.
Now now!!!!!!
Looks like I am becoming an expert in poetry ๐
Now that the poet inside me has 2 wonderful poems to take credit of, I realize that writing the first two paragraphs is the easier part. To continue the poem for more than 8 lines is really tough!!
What shd we do if we dont have a dimple?
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hehe….nice one…dont lose the habit….
If you don’t have a dimple see some one who has a dimple and smile at them ๐
ya.. don’t want to give up this habit. so writing frequently these days
Wow Wow and Wow it got me all smiles ๐
But no dimple !! ๐ฆ
What the heck still I got to smile right ? ๐
forget about the dimple
and keep smiling ๐
yeah, now OG is smiling ๐
good one!!! life is meant to be lived well as we have only one….. ๐
btw, does not “senile” mean old and forgetful….
how did it come in that context, I am not able to understand……. in the first para ๐ ๐
senile=Mentally or physically infirm with age.
It would mean not looking older than our age and by that we can infer that we can look younger than our age ๐
Nice! Sooper!…. keep up the habit of writing more and more poems like that!… Try your hand at sonnets too!…
thanks..
Yeah will keep smiling ๐
and trying hard to dimple
that bit it is simple
but the thought of senility
stressed me so much
it might make me
break out in pimples ๐
Mystery: ๐
as i have already mentioned in reply to OG senility doesn’t just mean getting old.
So don’t worry ๐
I was busy working hard
to add a dimple to my smile
i clicked submit
but the comment is a lost file!!
this comment box says nothing!!
am i gone senile!!??
the 1st comment was caught is spam don’t know why.. so u couldn’t see it
liked this smiley poem ๐ so says the one who is simply in love with smileys ๐
seriously that brought a smile ๐
Indyeah,
“so says the one who is simply in love with smileys :D” everyone can understand this part by looking at your posts and comments ๐
hey.. great going….
waiting to read many more… now that i am free
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waiting to read many more poems from me?
If you remember, it was you who started this poetry business in your blog long long ago.
So you continue your good work and by that you’ll inspire me to write more poems ๐
this is such a sweet start,
poetry indeed is an art,
you have set the trend,
let us follow the bend,
Why would we get mad,
Its not so bad,
Agree not as good as me,
but then not everyone is me….
he he he he ….. ๐ ๐ ๐
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I am glad,
that it was not so bad ๐
lol at the line “Agree not as good as me, but then not everyone is me..”
he he he…
thats me re…
the modest guy re..
Oh!!! the modest you!
Mystery, That is essential. That Smile. Me smiling but no dimples. I need to borrow it from Peanut ๐
๐ both u and peanut keep smiling ๐
U have written well ๐
Like solilo i have to take the dimple from varunavi
๐ looks like all the mothers are borrowing the dimple frm their kids ๐
Very nice ๐ I can see that the poetry talent abounds in your commentators ๐
Everyone is getting inspired by one another and writing poetry. It started with IHM’s post i guess. For one of her post she asked the comments to be in poem form and everyone realized they had a poet in them ๐ and the flow continued here
oh my god.. is this u..? wat a sweet poem.. i’m really thrilled tat u wrote this.. nice.. ๐
i’m finding a new person in this new world miss mystery.. ๐
yes it is me who wrote it ๐
“i’m finding a new person in this new world miss mystery.. :)” that’s why tell you to visit my blog more often and know more about me which u dint know before ๐
Made me smile a mile
Pls do write more than once in a while ๐
Will definitely try to write more Swaram. Glad that it made u smile
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You are seriously good at this! ๐
I loved the poem!
“Problems will come and go,
But your smile will bring a glow,
Which keeps you going,
And doesnโt make life boring.”
These lines are my favorite! ๐
Nice lines na? Sometimes i wonder if i was the one who wrote it ๐